Tahiya
Chowdhury 09/16/13
“The Singer
Solution to World Poverty” Response
In “The Singer Solution to World Poverty”,
Peter Singer effectively uses counterarguments and refutation to strengthen his
argument. Singer makes the choice of
acknowledging and addressing the opposing views of his arguments and then
denying the validity of the opposing claims. When touching upon the topic of
individual’s fair share, he considered the opposing claim, “If every citizen
living in the affluent nations contributed his or her share I wouldn’t have to
make such a drastic sacrifice…So why should I give more than my fair share?” By
acknowledging this opposing claim, Singer appeals to logic. He proves that he
understands a viewpoint other than his own, and he has knowledge about other evidences.
Later he refutes by saying, “While the idea that no one need do more than his
or her fair share is a powerful one, should it prevail if we know that others
are not doing their fair share and that children will die preventable deaths
unless we do more than our fair shares?” This refutation helps strengthen his
argument by denying the validity of the counterargument and shows that he
stands by his view. Singer’s farm grasp on the structural organization of the
essay also serves as a logical appeal.
He also includes facts to logically support his argument and credibility
of his argument.
Singer’s use of the two theoretical scenarios greatly influenced the
effectiveness of his argument. It
allowed him to invoke response from the readers and draw a parallelism between
the characters of the two scenarios and Americans who do not donate. The
comparison between the character of Bob and the people who do not donate, is effective in portraying how those
individual’s determine whether a child
lives or not. He also stressed the importance and the difference one can make
by donating a small amount of their money which they spend on luxury. Singer used Peter
Unger's theory that it would only take $200 to “help a sickly two-year-old
transform into a healthy six-year-old.” This justification would make the
readers want to donate money because it appeals to their emotion by making them
feel sympathy for the sick children overseas, and portrays the difference they
can make in a child’s life, by donating only $200.
There are some parts of the essay
when Singer’s argument loses its persuasion. At some points, Singer went to
extreme measures to convince people to donate. He relied more on guilt-tripping
the readers than persuading with justifications, which can ultimately cause the
readers to feel accused and lose interest in the argument. Singer, in a sense, commands
the readers to donate each penny they spend on luxury, “whatever money you're spending
on luxuries, not necessities, should be given away.” This weakens his argument
because earlier he asked people to donate just $200 dollars, but now he asks
them to donate every cent of their extra money. The idea of giving up all of their
extra money that they earned can cause people to feel irritated and object the
idea. His continuing push to make people to donate can make some readers feel
they are being pressured.
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